Firstly, you had a lot of grammatical errors and you did not put colons in front of names of cities. The temple in athens is called the Parthenon.Your pictures were not pixellated, which is good, and it is very visually appealing in general.
I liked how you put in the videos and what I don't like is the font size make it bigger and the the pictures were ok.
Good Comments:You had good amount of information You had a youtube video more visually appealingYour pictures not pixelatedSuggestions:Sidney is not it United states it is in australiaThe world map was pixelated
You have a good picture but I don't like that you don't write the city on the world map.
Firstly, you had a lot of grammatical errors and you did not put colons in front of names of cities. The temple in athens is called the Parthenon.
ReplyDeleteYour pictures were not pixellated, which is good, and it is very visually appealing in general.
I liked how you put in the videos and what I don't like is the font size make it bigger and the the pictures were ok.
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ReplyDeleteYou had good amount of information
You had a youtube video more visually appealing
Your pictures not pixelated
Suggestions:
Sidney is not it United states it is in australia
The world map was pixelated
You have a good picture but I don't like that you don't write the city on the world map.
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